Logliner
Posted: 2017-05-29T02:14:47+10:00 In:

A young girl possessed by a Demon, writes an epic in which she demonstrates the Demon as her God, Christ, because he is harmless and inspirational.

A young girl possessed by a Demon, writes an epic in which she demonstrates the Demon as her God, Christ, because he is harmless and inspirational.
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    1. Logliner

      Writes an epic isn’t a compelling enough verb for me to watch the film
      Are we supposed to sit with the popcorns while she “writes”

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    2. Uberwriter

      how is he inspirational goes on the first half
      what “changes” does he bring in her could become the first half of act II (page 25-55 in a 120 page script)

      then the “opposing forces” and “their why” to be build upto the second half
      How does presence of this demon create conflict in the plot which seemed to be so far so good?

      premise is cool but your logline fails to specify “conflict” and her “goal thus”

      when the demon possessed girl does (verb)
      she must do (verb) to achieve (certain goal) or else (stakes)

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