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ragingbullPenpusher
Posted: July 17, 20122012-07-17T09:05:40+10:00 2012-07-17T09:05:40+10:00In: Public

A young girl travels through the woods to find a cure for her fathers illness during the end of the world and the end of humanity

This is a student short film. A young girl and her father have survived in the wild for three years after the apocalypse, hiding from other humans who have become cannibals, and avoiding the cities. When the father becomes ill the daughter takes it upon her self to travel to the nearest city. Expecting to be confront by the flesh eating enemy she is faced with something far worse, normality.
She learns, that when faced with the breakup of his marriage her father kidnapped his daughter from her alcoholic neglectful mother and he made up the whole story to keep her with him. The cannibals are infact normal humans and fearing he may lose her he has forced her to hide from them so they won’t be spotted
While waiting for her mother in a police station the girl and faced with giving up her father she escapes and returns to her him playing along with the fantasy life he has made up,

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    1. asamman Penpusher
      2012-07-17T09:27:28+10:00Added an answer on July 17, 2012 at 9:27 am

      I like the idea of the film and the twist about the dad’s lie. Would be great if you can somehow hint to that in the logline.

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    2. arifnash
      2012-07-19T03:47:47+10:00Added an answer on July 19, 2012 at 3:47 am

      I agree with asamman. Great idea that the logline failed to show. here It just looks like you take part of your story as your logline, You suppose to sum up your story so we can be interested in the first place.

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    3. ThisainTreal Penpusher
      2015-11-19T08:31:17+10:00Added an answer on November 19, 2015 at 8:31 am

      The concept is awesome. But make sure you encapsulate your whole idea in it too.

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