Samurai
Posted: 2019-02-20T02:53:18+10:00 In:

A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.

A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Samurai

      This one is kind of wordy in my opinion. Help on consolidating it, please.

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    2. Logliner

      How about this:

      After discovering the previous ruler was murdered, a?young impressionable man called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom must launch an investigation and avoid being the next casualty.

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    3. Singularity

      I agree with gmffr. The goal would be the lead character trying to avoid?being the next casualty, not him, thinking about how his death might affect everyone.

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