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Posted: 2018-10-20T08:09:12+10:00 In:

A young teen decides to run away from home in order to escape the abuses from his father.

A young teen decides to run away from home in order to escape the abuses from his father.
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    1. Singularity

      Is the story about him trying to leave the house? Or is the story about what happens after he runs away? I can’t tell from this logline.

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    2. Uberwriter

      You have laid the ground work. Now give me the overall story.

      Running away to escape abuse a teen ……

      Do they just find more abuse on the road. Do they finally come home and fix the problem, get dad arrested to save mum.

      There is so much gold for you to mine. Can you tell me how you plan to do it.

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    3. Singularity

      There’s a story to tell, here, about life on the mean streets.? The fate of most runaways is to jump from the frying pan into the fire.

      But?”he doesn’t decide to run away ” – – he just runs away.? And then what?? A logline outlines a plot.? And a plot is not about deciding ,but what happens after a life changing decision is made.? Which is….?

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    4. Logliner

      Is there a mother? Where does he live and where does he go? When does the action takes place? Is it a flashback?

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