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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: December 11, 20202020-12-11T00:14:52+10:00 2020-12-11T00:14:52+10:00In: SciFi

A space detective loses touch between fantasy and reality when she finds herself in a dystopian city to destroy and capture cyborg hunters who robbed a plane.

Galaxy Crash

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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2020-12-11T01:57:46+10:00Added an answer on December 11, 2020 at 1:57 am

      There’s a disconnect between “loses touch between fantasy and reality” and her goal of “to destroy and capture cyborg hunters who robbed a plane”. There needs to be some sort of relationship between the two for this to make any sense.

      Is she there to destroy them or capture them? Can’t do both! I thought they were cyborg hunters too… why are they robbing a plane?

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      • Mike Pedley Singularity
        2020-12-11T01:58:24+10:00Replied to answer on December 11, 2020 at 1:58 am

        Please answer these questions in your logline, not in a lengthy explanation in response to my questions.

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      • Richiev Singularity
        2020-12-11T13:02:57+10:00Replied to answer on December 11, 2020 at 1:02 pm

        Did the cyborg hunters ‘steal’ the plane, or did they rob the ‘people’ on the plane, kinda confusing as well.

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        • IvyEight6 Penpusher
          2020-12-11T22:38:26+10:00Replied to answer on December 11, 2020 at 10:38 pm

          They were robbing the plane.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2020-12-11T12:51:58+10:00Added an answer on December 11, 2020 at 12:51 pm

      “When he’s hired to track down a stolen plane, a gritty detective must search for clues in a dystopian city where there is only one rule, keep your mouth shut.”

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2020-12-11T12:52:53+10:00Replied to answer on December 11, 2020 at 12:52 pm

        It’s a she.

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    3. Ckharper Samurai
      2020-12-13T18:52:30+10:00Added an answer on December 13, 2020 at 6:52 pm

      Maybe …When an army of cyborgs capture a plane destined to.., (what’s special about this plane?), a fierce space detective must take it back.

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2020-12-14T01:22:02+10:00Replied to answer on December 14, 2020 at 1:22 am

        The plane they robbed because they transported them back to Earth.

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