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After a hospital explosion claims the life of her recently-born infant, a suicidal police officer agrees to play a supernatural game where she's pitted against the terrorist who ruined her life.
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Overall not bad
‘Infant’ implies ‘recently born’ so don’t need to say it twice.
Not sure what you mean by supernatural game, that’s where the logline starts blurring a bit.
With a few little changes this should be good.
I have no idea what supernatural game means, either. The logline lacks specificity on what the plot is really about.