Posted: 2012-11-21T19:59:11+10:00 In:

AFTER A LONG ABSENSE FROM THE TSREET ACOP GOES BACK TO THE STREET TO DISCOVER A NEWLY INVENTED DRUG THE CRAZY IMPULSE DRUG WHICH MAKE PEOPLE BEHAVE STRANGELY.THE STRANGE BEHAVIOR LATER BECOME A TREAT TO THE CUMMUNITY.

BACK TO THE STREET.

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    4 Reviews

    1. All caps and lots of spelling mistakes? That’s it, no one’s gonna take this seriously!

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    2. Okay, that’s interesting. Taking as read the need to turn off the caps lock and work on the spelling: what does the cop do about the situation? And why is he the only one who can save the day? The idea is good – now you need to find the compelling connection between that idea, and your character…

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    3. Logliner

      John, you have posted 3 loglines. Can you please – in the spirit of this site – review 2 loglines for each (i.e. 8 loglines in total)?

      Please also post loglines in normal, mixed case. ALL CAPS LOOKS VERY BAD.

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    4. Definitely want to clean this up grammatically. Use spell-check and keep the logline down to a sentence!

      Also you should write what the drug does to people in the logline. That’ll give it something that draws you in, and it makes it stand out from the rest of the “biological weapon gone wrong”.

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