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After a man discovers his wife has been cheating for years, he re-connects with the first girl he ever fell in love with to remind himself who he used to be.

After a man discovers his wife has been cheating for years, he re-connects with the first girl he ever fell in love with to remind himself who he used to be.
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    1. Singularity

      LucindaFarnsworth:

      I like the premise.? Although it’s definitely not a coming of age story.? (The genre label you use to label your story is critical in marketing your script. )

      I suggest a version with an ironic twist:

      After his wife dumps him, a man returns to his home town to win back the heart of the girl he dumped for his wife.
      (25 words)

      fwiw

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    2. Singularity

      “When he discovers his wife has been cheating, a newly divorced man heads back to his hometown to win the heart of the girl he let slip away when he was young and dumb.”

      (Or possibly, the one that got away)

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