Samurai
Posted: 2019-02-28T00:36:04+10:00 In:

After a moving train is hit by a strange meteor, an elite unit must survive the flesh eating demons that stand between them and the Engine Car, where they must stop the train from crashing. (revised edition round 1)

After a moving train is hit by a strange meteor, an elite unit must survive the flesh eating demons that stand between them and the Engine Car, where they must stop the train from crashing. (revised edition round 1)
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    1. Singularity

      How does a moving train survive being hit by a meteor?

      Meteors come from space… where do demons come into play? I was expecting aliens.

      Surely once the train is stopped they still have a huge issue in that there are flesh eating demons…

      I think you need a central protagonist too – the leader of the elite unit perhaps??

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    2. Singularity

      I think the second half of the logline is very solid and an improvement over the original.

      However, to follow up on what Mikepedley85 said:
      Film is a visual medium. Any meteor that would be visually impressive on screen would destroy the train and leave a huge crater.
      Any meteor that would not destroy the train would be the size of a pea?and go, ‘plink’ and not be visually impressive.

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