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Posted: March 9, 20162016-03-09T03:00:35+10:00 2016-03-09T03:00:35+10:00In: Comedy

After a nerdy political science student from Greece gets a scholarship to study abroad in New York, he meets a pop star as student at the university and tries to date her, but their different worldviews lead to tension.

After a nerdy political science student from Greece gets a scholarship to study abroad in New York, he meets a pop star as student at the university and tries to date her, but their different worldviews lead to tension.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-03-10T14:10:18+10:00Added an answer on March 10, 2016 at 2:10 pm

      Agree with Nir Shelter and FFF.

      The logline appears to be?setting up an “Odd Couple”, a tried-and-true relationship for laughs.? But after the setup, then what?? Odd couple relationships are usually played out in the context of an ongoing struggle for something both badly want that creates the tension.

      So what is the objective goal that creates the tension?

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      2016-03-10T01:14:16+10:00Added an answer on March 10, 2016 at 1:14 am

      Their different worldviews lead to tension ? ?is too vague for me.
      When a greak scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student…. then what exactly happens, in terms of plot, story?

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-03-09T08:26:03+10:00Added an answer on March 9, 2016 at 8:26 am

      Does he date her or just try to?

      I take it you mean that they go on a date, however I don’t see what the problem is for the main character. They go on a date then they realise that their different world views lead to tension and they stop dating, what is the story worthy problem that the main character needs to overcome?

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