Singularity
Posted: 2013-07-03T06:50:24+10:00 In:

After a relationship coach's hired by distraught parents to convince their thirty-something son to leave the nest, matters become complicated when she falls in love.

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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      I like your idea. Hope it’s more than a practice exercise.

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    2. Singularity

      Thanks DPG, I thought I would try a ‘classic’ logline to hone my skills a little. I like your re-write.

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    3. Singularity

      An energetic female relationship coach succeeds in helping distraught parents get their 30-something slacker son to leave the nest, only to fall in love with him.

      I also think the story could work well the other way: he falls in love with her. Whatever, I think it’s a promising premise.

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