Logliner
Posted: 2016-06-19T16:59:53+10:00 In:

After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor joins forces with a mediocre comedian to create a Tony-worthy Broadway production.

After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor joins forces with a mediocre comedian to create a Tony-worthy Broadway production.
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    1. Samurai

      Hello Castler Media,

      Neat logline. There’s nothing I see here in desperate need of rewording or clarification. A [dead] failed actor and a so-so comedian trying to create a stellar Broadway production – Tony worthy?? I foresee endless struggles and conflicts with these characters.

      I also get a drama-vibe from this, too, even though you have it assigned under Comedy.

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    2. Singularity

      Story is conflict. There is literally no conflict in this logline.

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    3. Singularity

      As Richiev said.

      And there’s nothing at stake, no compelling reason why the spirits failed actor and mediocre comedian MUST put on the production.

      Even in comedy, there’s gotta be conflict and there’s gotta be stakes.

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    4. Logliner

      After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor risks his immortal soul in a wager with Death over the success of a brand new Broadway production.

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    5. Singularity

      In the major league religions, his soul is already damned for having committed suicide .?And this version obscures the fact that he’s producing the Broadway show. ? And how can he produce a Broadway show when he’s ?dead? ?And why would death take the wager when, in terms of the actor’s soul, ?he’s already won?

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