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After a werewolf slaughters the family of a pregnant newlywed, she learns a Grimm ancestral secret and becomes a cold-hearted huntress while investigating who stalks her.

After a werewolf slaughters the family of a pregnant newlywed, she learns a Grimm ancestral secret and becomes a cold-hearted huntress while investigating who stalks her.
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    1. Singularity

      This premise has much potential.

      Best to remove “…while investigating who stalks her.” because this is a secondary goal which subsequently dilutes the primary goal of hunting the Werewolf.

      Hope this helps.

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    2. Mentor

      Hello,

      what is a Grimm secret? I would cut this sentence since “learning a Grimm ancestral secret” means nothing for the reader (it means nothing for me).

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