After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.
JasonGPenpusher
After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.
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And what exactly does he do to discover “what makes…”? ?What’s the visual? Once again, film is a visual medium. What’s the visual for “love” and “meaning” in his life? ?What does that scene look like?
There are a 10,001+ ways a person can find love and a meaningful life. ?What is the specific way he chooses?
IOW: ?what’s the plot? ?What does he try to do to find love and meaning in his life? ?To prove everyone is wrong about him?
How does he achieve his goal?
I am a big fan of “The Razors Edge” in which the protagonist, who is searching for the meaning of life, goes to India. What does your lead character have to ‘do’ to discover meaning?
What the others wrote.
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