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I agree with the others. Receiving criticism is never easy but, as Richiev said, it’s kinda down to how you interpret it. Just know that everyone here is in the same boat. We are all trying to write good stories and every bit of feedback you receive should be helpful (even if it may feel overly negative). If someone is just being a dick… ignore them. It’s not worth the effort!

In my experience, people comment less on a logline that’s not too bad or even pretty good. I think that’s the nature of this logline beast to be honest – most of the comments you receive will probably be more critical BUT you have the right to reply. But it is most definitely not personal and shouldn’t be taken that way. There have been times in the past where I have taken comments too personally, and I’m sure others have too, but I always try and remember that the only person who has all the information about my idea is me. The only bit that everyone else has is whatever 35 or so words I choose to put in the logline. If something is unclear, or prompts questions, then I expect someone to highlight it… more than that, I want?someone to highlight it. The comments I receive here are likely to reflect comments that a potential producer would have so if I can get as few comments here as possible, I know that there’s a chance a producer might at least give it a chance.

Ultimately, as thedarkhorse said, take what you need. Nobody else is going to write it but you. Trust yourself because you know what you’re trying to achieve.