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Rutger OosterhoffLogliner
Posted: May 24, 20152015-05-24T19:58:22+10:00 2015-05-24T19:58:22+10:00In: Public

After an undercover hammerhead shark agent and his white shark crime boss bump their heads against a Japanese wale ship, the hammerhead thinks he?s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to his traumatised boss, who ? after witnessing the whale slaughter ? doesn?t want to kill big fish anymore.

Analyze Fish

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    1. pressedham_d
      2015-05-25T14:36:54+10:00Added an answer on May 25, 2015 at 2:36 pm

      “Analyze Fish” is an amazing title.

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    2. Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
      2015-05-25T17:16:13+10:00Added an answer on May 25, 2015 at 5:16 pm

      Thanks, but you know I stole it from “Analyse This” With the logline about the same thing. Give me the same thing only different.

      What do you think, could this still be a child movie or is the “Whale killing to heavy”. Any people know how to shorten this logline keeping the content.

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    3. pressedham_d
      2015-05-26T12:36:03+10:00Added an answer on May 26, 2015 at 12:36 pm

      What’s the main conflict in the film? I’m guessing it’s a cops versus criminals thing, but that doesn’t really come through in the logline, you just state that they’re an undercover and a crime boss without relating about that story – find your conflict, focus on that, and try and cut the rest.

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    4. Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
      2015-05-28T19:58:20+10:00Added an answer on May 28, 2015 at 7:58 pm

      OK, thank -I’m going to work on that!

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