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Paul ClarkeSamurai
Posted: November 3, 20122012-11-03T02:29:06+10:00 2012-11-03T02:29:06+10:00In: Public

After being accused of murder, a naive woman must overcome fear and flee her sheltered world in search of the truth, only to discover she may be the worlds greatest assassin.

Raised by Wolves

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    1. TanyaH
      2012-11-05T04:39:17+10:00Added an answer on November 5, 2012 at 4:39 am

      I’m not sure i like the description of her character ‘naive’ I wonder if there is a better way to describe her.
      Is she a mother? What’s her career? If she were a mum that would be cool. Lots to leave behind and also to fight for!

      After being accused of murder, a mother has no choice but to leave behind everything she knows in search of the truth, that she may be the greatest assassin in the world.

      A bit long but it makes her sound stronger. Hope this helps x

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    2. GriffUK
      2012-11-04T00:59:29+10:00Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 12:59 am

      Intriguing stuff. I’m not sure the overcoming fear bit is actually necessary though, it’s a bit vague to me. Why not call her a ‘fearful’ woman and cover her naiivit? with that as well? Just from this one liner though, I’d watch it!

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