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LeviathanSamurai
Posted: March 17, 20182018-03-17T14:11:00+10:00 2018-03-17T14:11:00+10:00In: Horror

After being arrested for having dangerous future technology, the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android, loyal to him, upon the police station in an attempt to escape.

After being arrested for having dangerous future technology, the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android, loyal to him, upon the police station in an attempt to escape.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-03-18T08:53:30+10:00Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 8:53 am

      This is confusing – “…the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android…” so the prison guards unleash the android, not the MC? But I thought the MC was the evil genius with future tech…

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2018-03-18T02:35:12+10:00Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 2:35 am

      “After he’s arrested, an evil genius unleashes a mind-controlled battle droid on an unsuspecting police station forcing the men in blue to either somehow destroy the robot or illegally kill their?prisoner.”

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    3. Leviathan Samurai
      2018-03-18T01:09:16+10:00Added an answer on March 18, 2018 at 1:09 am

      Well, I’m trying to write a story where the villain wins. Thought that might be a new kind of twist in imagination. See where it leads.

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2018-03-17T16:57:58+10:00Added an answer on March 17, 2018 at 4:57 pm

      Your lead character sounds more like the bad guy than the good guy

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