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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: October 25, 20202020-10-25T07:50:35+10:00 2020-10-25T07:50:35+10:00In: Comedy

After being disowned by her friends, a high school student becomes a narcotics investigator to get revenge on a clique of stoner girls after a fellow classmate died of an overdose.

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    1. Odie Samurai
      2020-10-31T01:23:24+10:00Added an answer on October 31, 2020 at 1:23 am

      To my understanding, a career in law enforcement doesn’t begin until AFTER high school. What if she was a nark for the cops to bust the drug dealing clique of girls but things get deadly?

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2020-10-31T02:26:14+10:00Replied to answer on October 31, 2020 at 2:26 am

        How should I revise it?

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        • Odie Samurai
          2020-10-31T02:44:54+10:00Replied to answer on October 31, 2020 at 2:44 am

          I missed this was a comedy. Fix the fact gap that your protag cannot be a high schooler and a police officer. Since this is a comedy she can use some absurd way to get revenge on this clique.

          Thinking out loud – what could happen when a jilted member of a pothead clique seeks revenge via the law in a legalized recreational mary jane state?

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          • IvyEight6 Penpusher
            2020-10-31T02:58:42+10:00Replied to answer on October 31, 2020 at 2:58 am

            Ok, then what can she be.

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    2. IvyEight6 Penpusher
      2020-10-28T06:28:48+10:00Added an answer on October 28, 2020 at 6:28 am

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