Bad Friend
IvyEight6Penpusher
After being disowned by her friends, a high school student becomes a narcotics investigator to get revenge on a clique of stoner girls after a fellow classmate died of an overdose.
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To my understanding, a career in law enforcement doesn’t begin until AFTER high school. What if she was a nark for the cops to bust the drug dealing clique of girls but things get deadly?
How should I revise it?
I missed this was a comedy. Fix the fact gap that your protag cannot be a high schooler and a police officer. Since this is a comedy she can use some absurd way to get revenge on this clique.
Thinking out loud – what could happen when a jilted member of a pothead clique seeks revenge via the law in a legalized recreational mary jane state?
Ok, then what can she be.