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Callum.SPenpusher
Posted: May 21, 20132013-05-21T01:39:20+10:00 2013-05-21T01:39:20+10:00In: Public

After being shot by a gang in a perilous south African town, an academic student who desires a status in Journalism is claimed to be in the gang by the locals and tries to seek freedom from a town he so dearly wants to help.

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-05-22T14:47:52+10:00Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 2:47 pm

      “desires a status in Journalism” is non-sensical. I don’t know what you mean.

      I’m also unclear on the dramatic premise. A gang shoots your protag. Then the town locals say that he’s from the gang? Then what? Why can’t he leave the town? What is he trying to help them do?

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    2. tammie
      2013-05-31T00:42:29+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2013 at 12:42 am

      yeah…. might have problems with this plot… being shot by the gang then being accused of being in the gang?? mmmm

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