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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: August 13, 20132013-08-13T11:44:19+10:00 2013-08-13T11:44:19+10:00In: Public

After buying the dwelling of a 20th century occultist, a young father loses all that he loves when dealing with his irrational motives – triggering deathly consequences in order to stop finally his aggravator.

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-08-13T14:14:54+10:00Added an answer on August 13, 2013 at 2:14 pm

      I literally have no idea what happens in your film, other than your protagonist (a young father – is there anything that can describe him better? An immature father? An irresponsible? Inexperienced?) buys a house that used to belong to an occultist.

      Once he owns the house, what does he do, who is trying to stop him (an aggravator? That’s way too vague) and what does he stand to lose? Does deathly consequences mean his life is what is at stake? What about the lives of his family?

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