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LeviathanSamurai
Posted: May 11, 20192019-05-11T10:44:40+10:00 2019-05-11T10:44:40+10:00In: Action

After faking a criminal’s death, the CEO of a mysterious syndicate who made it happen calls upon the man to fulfill his calling to help them find a book that could destroy humanity once and for all.

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    1. Ckharper Samurai
      2019-05-11T16:26:31+10:00Added an answer on May 11, 2019 at 4:26 pm

      Hmmm. I?ve been trying to crack this one but am at all points confused. So many questions, here?s a start:

      Is the man/criminal the protagonist? Why would he need to fake his death? Is the CEO is the baddie? And the man/criminal used to work for the CEO I take it?
      And how is this book going to destroy humanity?

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2019-05-12T21:20:56+10:00Added an answer on May 12, 2019 at 9:20 pm

      What connects the inciting incident (Faking a criminal’s death) and the goal (Finding a book that could destroy humanity)

      I am not seeing the connection in the logline.

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