Dumped (Revision 2)
After he kills his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, a teenager and his best friend turn their picture-perfect road trip into a fool-proof plan to dispose of the body, as they narrowly elude several close encounters with the police.
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I think it gets a little too wordy. If I read that in the TV guide I’d pass because it’s a lot to digest. I also wouldn’t watch this based on the protagonist being a criminal of the worst sort. I really don’t want to watch a story that’s not based on a true one about covering a crime with body disposal. The first thing that came to my mind is not wanting to see them succeed, but for the police to catch them so her family can get some closure and he can get punished.
“After killing his girlfriend in a drunken rage a young man and his friend turn their road trip into a police-eluding journey to dispose of the body.”
I gota agree with ravenguy with the audience not really rooting for the main character so it has to be a really interesting story.
Good Luck!!!