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Posted: 2018-02-02T05:06:38+10:00 In:

After her husbands release from prison, and her brother going to prison. A inveterate young lawyer must help her husband transition back into society while trying to fight her brothers case.

After her husbands release from prison, and her brother going to prison. A inveterate young lawyer must help her husband transition back into society while trying to fight her brothers case.
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    1. Penpusher

      I’m assuming the lawyer is the main character. The logline should give us a clear idea about what the specific struggle is for her — right now all i know is that she’s juggling two tasks. How do the tasks conflict? How do they push and pull on her moral code? Make her struggle specific, and the focus of the logline/script

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    2. Singularity

      Inveterate and young seem like they don’t go well together. Kind of an odd pair of adjectives to choose.

      How does the lead character being set in her ways to relate to the goal of helping either the Husband of Brother. (Either in a positive?or negative way)

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