Wolfbane – TV idea
Andrew BatesLogliner
After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor
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Hi B8C,
Love it. Could be T.V — but has feature potential imo. Even though I think you get away with two sentences, you could have a play at getting it down to one — but I had a play with that myself, and there is something about using two sentences here that works: It’s not clear who ‘…the Monster plaguing the town.’ is — but if this was the case with show — as in, there’s a full moon… we see him change… we know another werewolf is out there… see some carnage… but are kept guessing as to who is actually to blame, well I think that kind of works.
Anyway — best of luck with it, certainly pitch-able…
“After infected by a werewolf, a tormented farmer frantically searches for a cure while being stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the mayor.”
Whoops, my exampled didn’t need the word “Being”
“After infected by a werewolf, a tormented farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the mayor.”
Thanks all for the feedback,
Richiev I believe you have hit it on the head, thankyou!
Revised
“After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor”