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Andrew BatesLogliner
Posted: October 25, 20132013-10-25T07:49:27+10:00 2013-10-25T07:49:27+10:00In: Public

After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor

Wolfbane – TV idea

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    1. Tony Edward Samurai
      2013-10-25T09:31:41+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2013 at 9:31 am

      Hi B8C,

      Love it. Could be T.V — but has feature potential imo. Even though I think you get away with two sentences, you could have a play at getting it down to one — but I had a play with that myself, and there is something about using two sentences here that works: It’s not clear who ‘…the Monster plaguing the town.’ is — but if this was the case with show — as in, there’s a full moon… we see him change… we know another werewolf is out there… see some carnage… but are kept guessing as to who is actually to blame, well I think that kind of works.

      Anyway — best of luck with it, certainly pitch-able…

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2013-10-25T16:28:51+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2013 at 4:28 pm

      “After infected by a werewolf, a tormented farmer frantically searches for a cure while being stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the mayor.”

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2013-10-25T16:32:15+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2013 at 4:32 pm

      Whoops, my exampled didn’t need the word “Being”

      “After infected by a werewolf, a tormented farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the mayor.”

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    4. Andrew Bates Logliner
      2013-10-27T13:45:29+10:00Added an answer on October 27, 2013 at 1:45 pm

      Thanks all for the feedback,

      Richiev I believe you have hit it on the head, thankyou!

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      “After infected by a werewolf, a tormented Farmer frantically searches for a cure while stalked by ruthless hunters hired by the Mayor”

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