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blinkandyoullmissitPenpusher
Posted: October 2, 20152015-10-02T14:57:17+10:00 2015-10-02T14:57:17+10:00In: Action

After missing a bank heist, a young gunman has to do battle with vengeful gangsters and his own Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.

After missing a bank heist, a young gunman has to do battle with vengeful gangsters and his own Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.
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    1. sloanpeterson Logliner
      2015-10-07T08:15:34+10:00Added an answer on October 7, 2015 at 8:15 am

      I would echo the comments of the first reviewer. ?And I would add he must battle gangsters for what? ?For his cut of the money? ?For power? ?For a girl? ?For his life?

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    2. FFF Mentor
      2015-10-02T18:38:19+10:00Added an answer on October 2, 2015 at 6:38 pm

      Hello,

      I don’t understand “missing” – he didn’t show up or things went wrong or what? I suggest to be more specific about this.
      Maybe you can tell in onother way what is the main character’s disorder, which is, in my opinion, the most original things in this concept. What is his obsession, his compulsion? This is where the movie become interesting (to me).

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