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After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.
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As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don’t realize it at first.
To me this idea would work well as a slow reveal, Jordan Peele type story. I like the premise a lot!
Cook what?? Human flesh?? Vegan fare??? I’m guessing the former, but I shouldn’t have to guess, particularly since that is (probably) the story hook.? And if it is, it’s a good one.? So flaunt it, don’t conceal it.
And what does not “surviving” entail.? More cannibalism?? Again, please clarify.
You should give us a lead character (instead of 5) and hint at what their goal is.
Because as written, it appears the goal is to win the cannibal cooking competition. (The C.C.C. ?)
However that doesn’t seem likely, Escape would probably be a better goal.
Or to put it another way, ‘Survive’ is kinda a passive goal. It can work sometimes, like in the first Hunger Games. So I wouldn’t completely say it couldn’t be the goal but, fight or escape are far more interesting goals.
Anyway, not a bad premise with a many different directions the story could easily go.