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Posted: August 8, 20212021-08-08T21:32:08+10:00 2021-08-08T21:32:08+10:00In: Action

After receiving an email to partake in a heist experience, an intrepid engineering student and his friends must work out how to rob a casino; but when they discover the heist is real, they must find the creators and expose them before they’re caught.

So I have this idea but I’m struggling with creating a logline that I think is any good. Basically a group of students (focussing particularly on one of them for a specific POV) receive an email about participating in a heist experience (something like an escape room  kinda deal but irl) So they try and work out how to rob a casino which they succesfully do however they realise at the midpoint that it wasn’t fake and they’ve actually robbed a casino and they then have to find the organisers and expose them before they get caught themselves.

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    1. R.C. Penpusher
      2021-08-11T23:12:04+10:00Added an answer on August 11, 2021 at 11:12 pm

      Maybe: “When he discovers the ‘heist experiment’ he signed up for is actually a real casino robbery,”

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2021-08-11T05:07:15+10:00Added an answer on August 11, 2021 at 5:07 am

      When he discovers the ‘heist experience’ he signed up for is actually a real casino robbery, an engineering student and his friends must expose those behind the email before the FBI or the Mob catch up to them.

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        Odie Samurai
        2021-08-17T02:01:38+10:00Replied to answer on August 17, 2021 at 2:01 am

        Borrowing your ‘heist experience’ 😉

        “An intrepid engineering student must unravel a ‘heist experience’ email when discovering he inadvertently orchestrated a real casino robbery”

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        • Richiev Singularity
          2021-08-17T15:31:10+10:00Replied to answer on August 17, 2021 at 3:31 pm

          Very Succinct, and it gets the point across.

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    3. NavCR Penpusher
      2021-08-09T15:35:21+10:00Added an answer on August 9, 2021 at 3:35 pm

      Wow. That is actually a good idea and the logline sounds good to me. I feel bad I can’t help you much but I hope you can improve it. Thank you too.

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