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Posted: 2017-05-20T20:30:12+10:00 In:

After serving in the military for a few years, s/he has to confront the family they left behind. But when they come back the family is gone, without a trace.

After serving in the military for a few years, s/he has to confront the family they left behind. But when they come back the family is gone, without a trace.
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    1. Singularity

      Who is “s/he”? ?Does this logline propose dual protagonists? ? And if so, why two, instead of one? ?And are they both related to the same family? ?Or different families?

      Also the objective goal is not directly to “confront the family they left behind”. ?That may be their initial expectation, but that changes because of the inciting incident: ?they return to find that the family has returned without a trace. ?Surely, the objective goal is to find the missing family (from whom they are also alienated).

      fwiw

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    2. Singularity

      “When he returns home to find his family missing, a combat soldier must (Do this thing) if he’s is to (Accomplish this thing)”

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