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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: December 29, 20182018-12-29T08:59:59+10:00 2018-12-29T08:59:59+10:00In: Coming of Age

After two girls fall in love in El Salvador, they try to make a future, even if it means crossing the dangerous border for the ‘land of the free.’

After two girls fall in love in El Salvador, they try to make a future, even if it means crossing the dangerous border for the ‘land of the free.’
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2018-12-29T12:31:27+10:00Added an answer on December 29, 2018 at 12:31 pm

      If your script has an antagonist. Someone who persecutes the couple for being gay, it should be added to the script.
      It would look something like this:
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      “When she is persecuted by a powerful Catholic?priest for being gay, a determined woman from El Salvador and her lover escape their country and risk a dangerous border crossing into America in the hopes of living free.”

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2018-12-29T12:02:40+10:00Added an answer on December 29, 2018 at 12:02 pm

      I can’t tell if this logline is for the same story as your other logline you posted or if this logline is for a different story altogether.

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