An alcoholic blue’s player sells his soul for fame and money. Each day that goes by, the people around him die. The blue’s player is killing the people around him without even knowing it.
An alcoholic blue's player sells his soul for fame and money. Each day that goes by, the people around him die. The blue's player is killing the people around him without even knowing it.
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Huh? I saw a movie similar to this with Ving Rhames. Guy sells his soul to become biggest drug dealer. Devil comes back as his father and in the end it was really him who was doing the killing or not. It was some straight to video movie. It help my interest because of Ving.
My point is there was conflict your logline leaves me going huh, as in where is the conflict. How is he killing the people around him? Don’t be I ambiguous with you logline.
There is no hook for me… I would change the lastest sentence, to show the conflict the hero faces