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addjestinPenpusher
Posted: January 21, 20212021-01-21T13:01:47+10:00 2021-01-21T13:01:47+10:00In: Drama

An argument between two friends brings about the end of their relationship.

An argument between two friends brings about the end of their relationship.
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    1. [Deleted User]
      2021-01-29T02:14:25+10:00Added an answer on January 29, 2021 at 2:14 am

      I had an argument with my wife, ending our marriage. ~ You’d you read this script?
      Go with as Songo said.

      All the best.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2021-01-26T15:30:50+10:00Added an answer on January 26, 2021 at 3:30 pm

      Where is the dramatic conflict?
      Two friends argue, their friendship ends, problem solved. (Not a great solution to be sure but a solution none the less)

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    3. Tjmohr Logliner
      2021-01-22T22:39:44+10:00Added an answer on January 22, 2021 at 10:39 pm

      Too vague, add more details i.e main character’s flaw and what the argument is about

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    4. songo marcel Penpusher
      2021-01-22T13:08:54+10:00Added an answer on January 22, 2021 at 1:08 pm

      who is your protagonist and who is the antagonist? the end of the relationship may be at stake but it’s not strong enough to grasp the reader’s attention.

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