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hmmahathir
Posted: July 12, 20122012-07-12T01:42:05+10:00 2012-07-12T01:42:05+10:00In: Public

An elderly woman fantasizes about love stories in Korean Dramas, only to realize the love that she really needs to work on is the love of her family.

life comedy

just something that has been on my mind since a lot of elderly women loves watching korean dramas. The teenagers love k-pop.

very hard to find a good cast for the leading lady though..:-)

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    1. sharkeatingman
      2012-07-12T02:04:46+10:00Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 2:04 am

      Cute premise- I get it- but the logline is missing some elements. Needing “to work on…the love of her family” is only the end result, it cannot be the story. You’ll need an antagonist, some conflicts, the stakes, the goals.

      Lot’s of unanswered questions. Not familiar with a genre known as “life comedy” either. Sounds a bit broad, IMO. This would be my logline take on your concept:

      “An elderly woman, struggling to find contentment as her dysfunctional family deteriorates around her, escapes into a fantasy world, where her life plays out like Korean TV drama.”

      The protag- elderly woman
      The antag- dysfunctional family mmbers
      The goal- contentment
      The stakes- losing her deteriorating family, a life of unhappiness
      The conflict- (inner) dealing with old age, (outer) her family
      The genre- comedy/drama
      The “hook”- life fantasies in “Korean drama” format

      Hope this helps!

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