western-adventure
An engineer accused of treason goes on the lam to recover the fastest train in the West, which has been stolen by a notorious outlaw to pull off a million-dollar robbery.
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What is lam? Is it a typo, if so what is the word meant to be?
I love a fresh western idea.
Is there a reason the engineer wants to recover the train? Will this clear his (or her?) name?
Other than that I feel like I know just about everything I need to know going into this film.
It never occurred to me that some people might not understand “goes on the lam,” so try this on for size:
“An engineer accused of treason runs from the law in order to clear her name and recover the fastest train in the West, which has been stolen by a notorious outlaw to pull off a million-dollar robbery.”
My only concern – too wordy? or does it still work?
Pzeidman
I think it’s still a bit wordy, but you are close!
hows this?
An (character flaw) Engineer struggles on the Iam to prove her innocence, a stolen train, a million dollars and a notorious outlaw stand between her and freedom…