Penpusher
Posted: 2017-06-20T02:49:06+10:00 In:

An equation(chemistry) to develop a psychedelic drug that can be ingested in many forms ,the results in longevity have the same effect,but in/on each individual will be processed differently.

An equation(chemistry) to develop a psychedelic drug that can be ingested in many forms ,the results in longevity have the same effect,but in/on each individual will be processed differently.
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    1. Singularity

      Needs a lead

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    2. Uberwriter

      It comes across as a marketing line. Find a character and tell the story through their eyes. Try that and post a new version as a comment

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    3. Singularity

      A story only exists if it has a plot. A plot is a sequence of events and actions, taken a by character, that are bound by a unity of action in the pursuit of a goal.

      Point is a producer will want to know what the story is going to be, and for that you will need a plot and subsequently a character. Otherwise, you’re describing a situation not a story.

      So who is the main character? What do they want and why? How do they achieve it? How will the equation fit in?

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    4. Uberwriter

      “An equation(chemistry) to develop a psychedelic drug that can be ingested in many forms ,the results in longevity have the same effect,but in/on each individual will be processed differently.”

      From what I can understand, the logline is about a drug which can increase the length of someone’s lifespan.

      But the logline does not describe a plot. Who is the main character? What’s their goal? Is it to develop this drug? Why do they want to do that, their motivation? What’s the conflict of the story?
      Take a look at the Formula tab at the top of the page for general information on how to form a logline.

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    5. Penpusher

      This is something to be discovered,this is for producers who are looking for fresh ideas…this is something that have’nt been made.I have been doing a lot of research and reading a ?book called ”screenplay the fundations of screenwriting”,is a great book to people who have great ideas to create their screenplay from concept to final script.If someone gets interested on knowing more about this let me know…is VERY REAL it comes from real places and real situations,i guarantee that is not a waste of time.This,i recognize that is bigger than me…is not about materialistic things,is about an entity’s message to planet Earth and their habitants,other than creating an incredible series never seen and/or done before, something extremely new and having incredible ratings…is contributing to?this world,to this planet.

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