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Carter Breaux
Posted: January 9, 20132013-01-09T12:52:26+10:00 2013-01-09T12:52:26+10:00In: Public

An escaped convict and the corrupt cop who killed his wife simultaneously pursue each other, both with their own definition of justice in mind..

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    1. woobot
      2013-01-11T09:26:51+10:00Added an answer on January 11, 2013 at 9:26 am

      This has a great hook which could perhaps live as just the first part – An escaped convict and the corrupt cop who killed his wife simultaneously pursue each other; but the second part doesn’t really add much other than their implied sense of justice.
      Maybe you could add a twist, or some kind of irony – perhaps something that stands between them?
      Does the cop have to be corrupt? Does that make them both anti-heroes?
      I like the title too.

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