Logliner
Posted: 2016-08-04T14:56:02+10:00 In:

An examination of sexual relationships, in which three protagonists interact in different combinations.

An examination of sexual relationships, in which three protagonists interact in different combinations.
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    1. Singularity

      This is more of a situation than a story.

      story is conflict, so the first question? What is the conflict? What is standing in the lead characters way?

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    2. Uberwriter

      So what is the outcomes, what does that drive in the story.

      Three people enter into sex experiments but it leads to feelings and actions not part of the testing.

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    3. Logliner

      This is the logline to a Godard movie.

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    4. Singularity

      This logline lacks a main character description, however if it’s an ensemble there needs to be a good reason for the multi protagonists that is justified in the plot.

      Other wise as Richieve wrote: What is the conflict?

      Who wants what and why?

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    5. Singularity

      >>>This is the logline to a Godard movie.

      ?loge de l’amour (In Praise of Love)

      Actually, it’s a blurb, not a logline. ?Blurbs and loglines are targeted at different markets. ?A blurb is targeted at ?movie viewers. ?A logline is targeted at movie makers.

      The primary function of a logline is to get a script read. ?However, if you are as well established and have the reputation of Godard, you don’t need a logline to get your script read. ?If you’re not established in the industry, then you do.

      And loglines for movies should be posted under “Classics”.

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    6. If it’s for an existing film put it in classics and title the film. And this still is too vague to tell the story, more of a vague premise – I posted an intertwining story logline recently and got some good feedback you should check it out.

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