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PyroPanda76Penpusher
Posted: September 6, 20202020-09-06T07:06:16+10:00 2020-09-06T07:06:16+10:00In: Fantasy

An exiled emperor joins a resistance group to find and restore the throne’s rightful heir – his long-lost son – from his tyrannical brother.

Its working title is “The Throne of Thorns”.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2020-09-07T20:06:23+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 8:06 pm

      Most of the story points are here, I don’t believe the logline needs any significant changes.

      From a story standpoint:

      I do wonder why the Emperor is not trying to get his throne back for himself? Instead, the lead is attempting to secure the throne for his “Long-lost son”

      Normally people in power do not want to give up power. Wouldn’t the exiled emperor be the rightful ruler? Why secure the throne for a person he seems to not even know?

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