An independent realist woman’s life is abruptly disturbed when she finds a rich, powerful, and cold hearted man that tests her strength and willpower to melt the ice around his heart.
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An independent realist woman’s life is abruptly disturbed when she finds a rich, powerful, and cold hearted man that tests her strength and willpower to melt the ice around his heart.
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independent and realist is the opposite of delusional idiocy – why did she become like that?
Agreed with Mike and Richiev. The motivations in this story are unclear – why would these characters want to be in a relationship with each other? Why do they care about each other? And more importantly, why would the audience?
I simply don’t understand why an independent, realistic woman would want to be with a man who’s described as rich, powerful and cold-hearted. Why does she care about him? And more importantly, why will the audience? He doesn’t sound appealing in any way!
This is all so vague too. How is her life abruptly disturbed? How is her strength and willpower tested?
I don’t see much a story here! In all honesty, I’m concerned that whatever story could be found is incredibly old-fashioned – you’ve taken an strong independent woman and reduced her to someone who simply wants a man… and not just any man… a man who is in no way likeable.
You might want to change this a little since she has ice around her heart and he is cold-hearted, I am not sure how his cold-heartedness?could melt her icy heart.