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S.C.WillLogliner
An Introvert, fed up with his mediocre life, runs off and ends up in a twisted experiment, his girlfriend must then find and save him from his own brainwashed mind before he is lost forever.
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As FFF said. ?Whose story is it? ?Who is the protagonist?
Also the nature of the experiment needs to be made specific. ?How was he brain washed? ?What exactly happens to him that puts him in jeopardy?
Finally, ?as a card-carrying introvert (and ?content and proud), I take a special interest in stories where a principal character is portrayed as an introvert. ?Taking this logline at face value, my 1st impression is that the logline plays into the negative stereotype of introverts. ? Introversion has its own unique strengths, ?albeit sometimes challenging to portray in cinema, I grant you.
I hope I’m wrong, that you have enough (personal?) knowledge and understanding of introversion to portray the character with sympathy, insight and authenticity. ?
Just saying.
Hello, in my opinion you should decide if it’s the story of the introverted guy or his girlfriend and write the logline from his/her point of view.
Your logline start with the introverted boy as main character but in the second part it’s the girl who takes the lead. You should mention what kind of experiment is it and what kind of danger it implies.