An overconfident successful engineer creates a machine to venture inside a dying notorious murderer?s brain and walk in it like virtual reality, only to find himself lost in the man?s enigmatic mind, while he must escape before the man takes over his mind and body

The plot is unclear, what does the engineer have to achieve? What is his goal? What motivated him? to achieve it? What’s the inciting incident?

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