An uxorious husband stops at nothing to get his forlorn wife pregnant while he struggles with his resentful adult step-children over their mother’s estate.
zefrenoPenpusher
An uxorious husband stops at nothing to get his forlorn wife pregnant while he struggles with his resentful adult step-children over their mother’s estate.
Share
I am a little confused by this logline, Usually, children fight over an estate after their parent has died. However, we know the wife is alive because the lead is trying to get her pregnant.
I would zero in on that, in one or two words explain why the step-children are fighting over the estate, then let us know what the lead character is doing about it.
Because from how this is written, the fight over the estate seems to be the central conflict
This is what I can glean brother:
“A newlywed husband is hell-bent on getting an heir in order to prevent his combative step monsters from laying claim to their deceased rich mother’s estate”
The logline is to help me finish a university class about writing webisodes. Thanks for your longliners.