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Andrew BatesLogliner
Posted: May 16, 20122012-05-16T16:08:29+10:00 2012-05-16T16:08:29+10:00In: Public

Arthur survives a werewolf attack. With no clue or cure and a new moon rising, the hunter on his tail has all the answers.

Title: Wolfbane

Horror/thriller

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    1. Andrew Bates Logliner
      2012-05-21T14:31:51+10:00Added an answer on May 21, 2012 at 2:31 pm

      Still a work in progress.

      A passianate wildlife enthusiast chases leads on a series of bizarre animal mutilation, contracts the lycanthropy virus,
      He must now find a cure and safety from a group of relentless werewolf hunters.

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    2. Andrew Bates Logliner
      2012-05-20T23:10:03+10:00Added an answer on May 20, 2012 at 11:10 pm

      Wow thanks all, will go back and work on it. Cheers.

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    3. 2012-05-19T01:32:12+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2012 at 1:32 am

      Wow! I like it Sharkman. Nice thorough analysis. 🙂

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    4. sharkeatingman
      2012-05-19T01:14:48+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2012 at 1:14 am

      Andrew- the age is irrelevant, unless, of course, it’s relevant. Same with names.

      The protag is wildlife enthusiast. How would you describe him, character-wise? Lonely, blind, gay, obsessive-compulsive?

      The antag is the hunter. We have no further info on this person/thing.

      Goal- Cure his lycanthropy? He had another goal before he was bitten; what was it? If you use irony, it could be to save the grey wolves from extinction or something along those lines.

      Stakes- Dying, staying a werewolf…

      Inner conflict- wants to save wolves, now has become one?

      Outer conflcit- running from “hunter”

      Hook- the hunter becomes the hunted?

      Genre- horror

      Once you answer all of these elements, the logline almost writes itself. Then, by rearranging or replacing words with more colorful, useful descriptive and action words, you should reduce the larger phrases to one or two word phrases, and get the logline to under thirty words- 25 if possible. For example:

      “A game warden battling illegal poachers, contracts the werewolf virus, and must now protect the dwindling wolf population, including himself, from a sadistic pelt smuggler.”

      (Probably not your story, but…)

      Protag- game warden
      Antag- sadistic pelt smuggler
      Goal- protect himself, protect dwindling wolf population, catch poachers
      Inner Conflict- has become a werewolf
      Outer Conflict- battles poachers and sadistic pelt smuggler
      Irony- once protector of wolves, has now become one.
      Hook- werewolf game warden
      Genre- horror

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    5. 2012-05-18T15:59:00+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2012 at 3:59 pm

      Also Andrew, you many consider the goal of the main protagonist. And perhaps a little more description on the hunter, I’m not sure if his the antagonist or an ally.

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    6. Andrew Bates Logliner
      2012-05-17T18:42:31+10:00Added an answer on May 17, 2012 at 6:42 pm

      Arthur, 28 year old wildlife enthusiast survives a werewolf attack. With no clue or cure and a new moon rising, the hunter on his tail has all the answers.

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    7. 2012-05-17T17:22:01+10:00Added an answer on May 17, 2012 at 5:22 pm

      patrockable thankyou for your input.

      “Arthur, a 28 year old wildlife enthusiast survives a werewolf attack. With no clue or cure and a new moon rising, the hunter on his tail has all the answers”

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    8. patrockable
      2012-05-17T16:54:53+10:00Added an answer on May 17, 2012 at 4:54 pm

      Arthur survives a werewolf attack = great inciting incident.

      I’d like to know a bit more about Arthur, his profession, age, and maybe a character flaw? Knowing this might spark an extra bit of interest.

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