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McCreedyLogliner
As a biochemist becomes savagely aware of her birthright, she uncovers the Alpha werewolf who wants her for the pack is already in her life.
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More concise: “A woman discovers she is a werewolf and learns the pack leader trying to recruit her is already in her life,” for example. Her being a biochemist and her “savage awareness” are not really part of the main, attention grabbing idea. Also I can’t tell from this logline whether the project is comedy, horror, or something else.
I agree with Craig – but if you’re going to lose “biochemist” as the adjective to describe her, perhaps it’s worth including something else about her character which will explain the emotional journey the film is likely to traverse (by which I mean, if she’s described as “meek” or “timid” we know it’s going to be a journey of self empowerment, or if she’s “proud” it’s going to be a story of downfall or humility, “down-on-her-luck” it’s going to be a redemption story. “Biochemist” tells us nothing but her occupation).