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As a young man, Ted Geisel meets his future wife Helen, who encourages his fanciful drawings, and in the 1950s when Ted is struggling professionally, Helen helps inspire the children?s book that will become his first big hit, ?The Cat in the Hat.
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‘Dr. Seuss in Love’? 😉
I like the idea, others have made good comments on the logline. Is there a personal journal Geisel must go through in order to see ‘Cat in the Hat’ to completion? There should be, and it should be in the logline.
Sorry, I meant to sign off as “Steven Fernandez (Judge)” up there.
This bio-pic could work but it fundamentally needs a clear and dramatic facing-hefty-challenges scenario. (Which the logline does not portray.) The logline, at the moment, only mildly refers to the author’s ‘struggles’. This is not enough to inspire a potential producer.
Here’s a suggested rewrite: “Ted is a young underemployed dreamer in the fifties. He doodles child-like drawings while barely paying his bills. But Helen encourages him to make a book with his art. Ted’s crippling self-doubt, however, threatens the completion of ‘The Cat in the Hat’.”
Who doesn’t love Dr. Seuss??? Great idea! Your logline is a bit long, though. Suggestion: ‘Ted Geisel meets his future wife Helen, who encourages his fanciful drawings. When he reaches his breaking point professionally, she helps inspire his first big hit, The Cat in the Hat”.
Then to make it truly memorable, say the same thing, and set it in a Dr. Seuss rhyme pattern.