Blood & Stone
Based on a true story, set 70,000 years ago about a smart female hunter elected to lead her tribe out of Africa. Climate change, death, starvation, wild animals, betrayal and war with another tribe all stand between them and the arc of history.
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you have to tell the whole movie in one sentence, and be clear, a production house won’t buy it, unless it is clear, not vague. it is too vague again, it has to be something tangible…i get stuck there myself too…good luck…try again…i need a set up then a pay off, a plot? where is your pay off, what do they give up, change, or sacrifice, and then what do they get that changes them for the better and improves their world?
Ok rather then write a new logline. I’ll change the arc of history bit to. “all stand between them and a fate which will change the entirety of the ever after”