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Posted: 2015-07-07T22:59:52+10:00 In: ,

Based on the true story of Jordan Belfort, from his rise to a wealthy stock-broker living the high life to his fall involving crime, corruption and the federal government.

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    1. HI, blossomingscripts.

      OK, so I understand that this is based on the life of Jordan Belfort and that’s good. But I’d encourage you to get more detailed. Right now, the entire logline is very broad, undefined, you get the idea. Specifics will make it better, i.e., what’s Jordan Belfort’s conflict? I understand it involves crime/corruption/federal gov, but again, that’s vague. Need to supply more info. And, finally, how does he respond to the conflict? Does he run from the feds? Does he fight them? Great start, though.

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    2. It seems like an unfinished sentence. Like it needs something at the end.

      this is very rough idea:

      Based on this true story, from his rise to a wealthy stock-broker living the high life to his fall involving crime, corruption and the federal government, Jordan Belfort must BLAH BLAH BLAH (what does he actually do or learn?)

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