Bubble Gum, used as a last minute fix on Apollo 13, causes the explosion in space, absorbs cosmic energy, and meteors to earth where townfolk begin vaporizing from its deadly radiation.

Hi there. Seems like you might have an interesting story, but the logline is very confusing. I suggest you reconstruct your sentence. What explodes, is it Apollo 13? What absorbs cosmic energy, the bubble gum or Apollo 13? What happens to the meteors? There’s a missing verb there. Do the meteors crash to Earth, or explode in the Earth’s atmosphere?

I hope that helps. Would d appreciate it if you could also comment on my logline.