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Bullying intensifies social isolation at a tender age in Marcos and leads to uncontrolled and subversive consequences.
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This logline is vague.
1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy,
2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn’t a socially acceptable one.
3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are.
A few more specifics and this should turn into a pretty good logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
This logline is vague.
1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy,
2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn’t a socially acceptable one.
3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are.
A few more specifics and this should turn into a pretty good logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
Only thing I will add to Richiev’s comments above is it would be very important to understand when the story begins. By that I mean what was the event that set the MC off to take action in the story?
What is the inciting incident?
Hope this helps.
Only thing I will add to Richiev’s comments above is it would be very important to understand when the story begins. By that I mean what was the event that set the MC off to take action in the story?
What is the inciting incident?
Hope this helps.
Thanks for your comments.Appreciate it
Thanks for your comments.Appreciate it